Rough cut

Rough Cut from Rachel King on Vimeo.

Rough Cut feedback

After having a viewing to the whole class, we were given the opportunity to write down feedback.

The main points that were highlighted were -

The gaps that we had in our rough cut

The editing of the argument

The fluency of the camera work

However, the black and white scenes were affective and the overall plot was complimented.

Filming Six

Day six of the filming, we had a slight flaw within our video, there was a huge gap!
We have added the dream sequence, which we shot in the forest near to our school. Sophie did the filming whilst Jake appeared in the video - he was to signify the confusion of Sophie the female characters wandering mind. How she is thinking of Jon despite her trying to move on.
Her mind is halfway gone.

Filming Five

Fifth day of filming, because we had such a big gap within our video we need to come up with another idea to fill it. We thought as much of the focus is upon Sophie towards the end, we could have Jon reminising, include more memories as he walks, thinking about her. However, we did not have time to complete all our filming last night to finish the rough cut. We are aware that we still have a lot of filming to complete, to improve it and contain all the conventions of a real music video.

The Memory

The flashback in black and white scene is exactly what we are planning to do.

Filming Four

Last night we had our fourth and hopefully final day of filming, again we used my house as the location. We shot more scenes of Jon and Sophie, the memory which is going to be edited to be in black and white we decided, we then filmed Sophie upset over the picture and Jon getting angry reflecting upon the argument.

We do still have large gaps within our rough cut, so needed to film more footage to enable us to edit it and know which parts we will need to refilm.

Existing Digipaks

These are existing examples of poster promoting Digipaks within the magazine industry. These contains significant elements that we will need to include in our own posters - clear writing, relevance to the tone and genre of music

Filming Three

This is our third day of filming, we did have a slight problem because the girl we were originally filming could not make any of the sessions. We changed her with another called Sophie as it was much easier timewise and reliability wise.

We refilmed some of what we originally filmed, including the bed scene and getting ready. As well as the arguing scene, which is what was causing some of the main problems.

Pictures Day Three

Locations

The locations we have been filming at have included my house mainly, the train station, Jakes's house.